Korean chicken
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I recommend Korean chicken and beer.
Korean chicken is different many other country.
We have so many kind of sauce.
And we made it some new culture.
Like example, today it\'s a very important sports day.
And we should order delivery chicken.
Very very delicious I recommend it.
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I recommend Korean chicken and beer.
>> I would like to recommend Korean chicken and beer.
Korean chicken is different many other country.
>> Korean chicken is different countries.
We have so many kind of sauce.
>> We have so many kinds of sauce.
And we made it some new culture.
>> And we made some new culture.
Like example, today it\'s a very important sports day.
>> Like for example, today is a very important sports day.
And we should order delivery chicken.
>> CORRECT
Very very delicious I recommend it.
>> It\'s very delicious that\'s why I highly recommend it.
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