Korean cuisine is largely based on rice, vegetables, and meats. What comes to mind when you hear the

2019-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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When I hear the word \'rice\', \"health\" comes to my mind. Because people think rice is healthier than flour in Korea. And \"mom\" comes to my mind too. mom usualy makes rice among faily members. So, somepeople who live far from their home miss mom\'s rice.

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When I hear the word \'rice\', \"health\" comes to my mind.

>>> Correct!
Because people think rice is healthier than flour in Korea.

>>> It\'s because in Korea, people think rice is healthier than flour.
And \"mom\" comes to my mind too. mom usualy makes rice among faily members.

>>> It also reminds me of \'mom\' or \'mother\'. Moms usually make/cook rice for the family.
So, somepeople who live far from their home miss mom\'s rice.

>>> People who live far from their home surely miss their mom\'s rice.

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