Korean cuisine is largely based on rice, vegetables, and meats. What comes to mind when you hear the
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When I hear the word \'rice\', \"health\" comes to my mind.
>>> Correct!
Because people think rice is healthier than flour in Korea.
>>> It\'s because in Korea, people think rice is healthier than flour.
And \"mom\" comes to my mind too. mom usualy makes rice among faily members.
>>> It also reminds me of \'mom\' or \'mother\'. Moms usually make/cook rice for the family.
So, somepeople who live far from their home miss mom\'s rice.
>>> People who live far from their home surely miss their mom\'s rice.
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