Korean culture 2

2011-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

4. Should Korean pop stars be able to speak Japanese to become successful? Um. I don't think so. They are singer who sing a song. If they are actor or comedian , they will have to know Japanese. But singes don't need to master Japanese. All they have to do is singing well. 5. Do you think the Korean culture boom in Japan will last long? I am not sure. But I can tell you that. There was a nice drama named "Winter sonata" It was aired in Japan about 10 years ago. and It was very booming among Japanese women. and its popularity has continued so far. It is a time for korean music to boom in Japan.

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