Korean drama.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
These days I watched drama that subject is Myongbulhurjeon. Main actor is Nam Kil Kim and Main actress is A-joong Kim.
Dr. [Name] is a person from Chosun dynesty time and AJ is current person. when NK is killed, he go to past or future and when he was current time, he met Dr. [Name] and he went back the past with her and they made a lot of episode. it was very fun and interesting. please imagine if I go back past and future. you can do a lot of wonderful things.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for the composition. See you later ^^
T. DON
These days I watched drama that subject is Myongbulhurjeon. Main actor is Nam Kil Kim and Main actress is A-joong Kim.
>> These days, I watched a drama and the title is Myongbulhurieon. The main actors are Nam Kil Kim and A-joong Kim.
Dr. [Name] is a person from Chosun dynesty time and AJ is current person.
when NK is killed, he go to past or future and when he was current time,
he met Dr. [Name] and he went back the past with her and they made a lot of
episode.
>> Dr. [Name] was a person from Chosun dynesty and AJ is the present person. When NK was killed, he went to the past or future and in that time,
he met Dr. [Name] and went back to the past with her and they made a lot of
episodes.
it was very fun and interesting. please imagine if I go back
past and future. you can do a lot of wonderful things.
>> It was very fun and interesting. Imagine if I go back
to the past and the future, I can do a lot of wonderful things.
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