Korean drama

2010-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday, I was tired a little so my voice was a little tried and bored. I am sorry about that. As my English teacher, it seems that you are the best teacher to give me stimulations. Thanks Yesterday, I went to bedroom a little late so that I got up moring a littel late. I watched an American drama named the Dexter. Nowadays, this is my favorite drama as well as the Korean drama. Nowadays, "the Giant", which is a very popular drama in Korea, but it ended yesterday. Regarding Korean drama, I think that Korea is the kingdom of drama. We had a plan with my wife at the begining of this year. We don't watch a drama and read a book. But the interesting and funny dramas prohibit us from reading a book. Anyway, my wife liks the drama too much and natually I watch it together.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]^^

I am so glad to hear that I help you motivate yourself. And I know all of us had a busy day so it's okay for you to feel tired and sound like it too. What's important is you still try your best to study our lessons. And for that I appreciate you as my student.

If only I don't have to work at night then I would also be watching dramas in the television. hahaha. My dad also likes to watch Philippine dramas. So I think it's just normal for guys to be so into it.hahaha.

See you later.

fierce&love,

~Ella^^

 

MY CORRECTIONS^^:

Yesterday, I was tired a little so my voice was a little tried and bored.

>>Yesterday, I was a little tired so my voice sounded bored and tired also.

 I am sorry about that.

>>CORRECT :) [it뭩 okay, Mr. [이름]!!]
As my English teacher, it seems that you are the best teacher to give me stimulations. Thanks
>>As my English teacher, it seems that you are the best one to give me motivations. Thanks!

>>Being my English teacher, it seems that you are the best one to motivate me. Thanks!
Yesterday, I went to bedroom a little late so that I got up moring a littel late.

>>Last night, I went to bed a little late so I already got up a little late the next morning.

 I watched an American drama named the Dexter.

>>I watched an American drama named 밆exter

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