Korean language supporters
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'r agree that Korean language supporters\'s attitutude and thought for English.
Their arguments are exclusive and isolated.
They also need opened minede and insigjt considering changing society.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
Korea is a very competitive country, if the mindset of the old generation remains the same, young generation would have a hard time going with the gflow of globalization.
Thank you for today!
Enjoy the weekend.
Aki~
I donr agree that Korean language supporters\'s attitutude and thought for English.
>>> I don\'t agree with those Korean language supporters\' attitude and thought about English.
Their arguments are exclusive and isolated.
Their arguments are exclusive and isolated.
>>> CORRECT!
They also need opened minede and insigjt considering changing society.
They also need opened minede and insigjt considering changing society.
>>> They also need to become open minded and have an open insight considering the change in society.
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