Korean Parents

2021-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jasmin

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My opinion is that most parents influence what university their child will attend especially in Korea! The reason is that there is much filial duty in Korea than other countries. For example, most Korean think following their parent\'s opinion is the best and important. Sometimes, there are people who say that if children do what they want not listening their parent\'s say, the children are really bad. Like this, I think when children choose their university or even they want to get a job directly not applying for a college, their parents don\'t let them to do what they want. Although, the children\'s choices are not wrong, even better, they maybe decide as one\'s parents say. This is because they don\'t want to feel guilty that they don\'t follow their parent\'s thinking. Therefore, because of traditional value in Korea, parents influence their children a lot when they choose university.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I will wait for your complete answer. have a great day. 
Jasmin

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