Korean People's attitude

Most korean people have physical greed. it said Only outside pursue.(it's subjective experienced.) i worked for majoy company, And public servant. there is a word. it doesn't exist substance,Only outside exist. actually,i know it's difficult, But don't be aware of problems in Nation. i guess perhaps i don't know about detailed operating, but it's actually a true. the gab bewteen the rich and the poor than when i was young, it's serious. we live in the same nation but we have several difference about life's style. my friend who he was born in California And he lives in California,he's an American of Korean extraction. we talked about Two nation(US Korean). sort of nation has difference, i hope Korean don't like so money, and authority.

  Hello, Happy Monday! Thank you so much for sharing me your story. You really have great ideas on your mind. Just keep on sharing your thoughts and ideas. Don't stop from learning English, still do your best on studying, believe in yourself. Thank you so much. Take care and have a nice day. T.Verna Here are my corrections: Most korean people have physical greed. >>CORRECT. >>OR. Most Korean people have their own greed for something.it said Only outside pursue.(it's subjective experienced.) >>It says that it is only outside that pursue.(it's subjective experienced.)i worked for majoy company, And public servant. >>I work for Majoy company as a public servant.there is a word. it doesn't exist substance,Only outside exist. >>There is a saying that goes this way. "It doesn't exist substance,only outside exist."actually,i know it's difficult, But don't be aware of problems in Nation. >>Actually I know it's difficult, but many are not aware about the problems of our nation.i guess perhaps i don't know about detailed operating, but it's actually a true.the gab bewteen the rich and the poor than when i was young, it's serious. >>I guess perhaps I don't know about detailed operating,but it's actually true that the issue about the gap between the rich and the poor when I was still young and until now is becoming serious.we live in the same nation but we have several difference about life's style. >>CORRECT. (Just don't forget to capitalize the first word of your sentence.) my friend who he was born in California And he lives in California,he's an American of Korean extraction. >>I have a friend who was born and living in California.we talked about Two nation(US Korean). >>We talked about two nations ( US and Korea)sort of nation has difference, i hope Korean don't like so money, and authority. >>The two nations have their own differences, I hope Korean people are not too greedy about money and power/authority.