Korean Pop Stars

I am proud of Korean pop stars. Nowadays, some of them are popular in other countries including Europe. They help to let foreigners know korea so that more people will be interested in Korea and visit here. More people will have a good feeling about our country and culture. Japanese people are open minded for accepting other culture. Since Japan is an island, they have accepted various cultures for the centuries. So their culture has developed with many other cultures.

Hello there my dear [이름], Job well done for making your composition. Talk to you again later my dear..:) Teacher Cam   I am proud of Korean pop stars. >>correct Nowadays, some of them are popular in other countries including Europe. >>correct They help to let foreigners know korea so that more people will be interested in Korea and visit here. >>correct OR' >> It increases tourism in Korea. More people will have a good feeling about our country and culture. >>correct OR; >> People will appreciate our country and culture. Japanese people are open minded for accepting other cultures. >>correct Since Japan is an island, they have accepted various cultures for the centuries.  >>correct So their culture has developed with many other cultures. >>So their culture has developed with many other country's cultures.