Korean's traditional culture.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesterday, I had an anniversary day of Grand parents' deadth.
In Korea, on this day, people make a food to eat for Grand parents.
Also, on this day, boys and men have to bow two times.
Girls and women have to bow four times.
After that, every people give a glass of liquor to them.
Then, people have to wait until they eat food.
For last when we turn of candlelight, an anniversary will be finished.
Now, people can eat foods.
강사 첨삭
It's the first time for me to read about that tradition. Thanks for the information. Here are your corrections. -Teacher JM
Yesterday, I had an anniversary day of Grand parents' deadth.
>>>Yesterday, I commemorated the death anniversary of my grand parents.In Korea, on this day, people make a food to eat for Grand parents.
>>>On that day, Korean people make food to be eaten by Grand parents.Also, on this day, boys and men have to bow two times.
>>>CorrectGirls and women have to bow four times.
>>>Girls and women have to bow four times.After that, every people give a glass of liquor to them.
>>>After that, every person gives a glass of liquor to them.Then, people have to wait until they eat food.
>>>CorrectFor last when we turn of candlelight, an anniversary will be finished.
>>>For last when we turn off the candlelight, the anniversary will be finished.Now, people can eat foods.
>>>Then, people can eat foods.
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