Korean Series
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I think KIA Tigers is a strong team.
Continue cheering for the team.
I will support your team as well. ^^
Enjoy watching the games!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Tommorrow is Korean Series start.
>> Tomorrow is the start of the Korean Series.
KIA tigers and Dusan Bears will have a match.
>> correct
I hope KIA Tigers win.
>> correct
KIA Tigers win for 10times yet.And at Korean Series KIA Tigers had a 10 games and 10games win.
>> KIA Tigers won 10 times already and in the Korean Series KIA Tigers had 10 games and they won in those 10 games.
It is really fantastic.
>> correct
KIA Tigers and Dusan Bears is the first match.
>> KIA Tigers and Dusan Bears will be the first match.
Today there is no game and there is a media day.
>> correct
And KIA tigers will have a match tommorrow and 26,28,29,30,1,2.
>> KIA tigers will have a match tomorrow and on October 26, 28, 29, 30, and on November 1, and 2.
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