Korean wave 'Hanlyu' ready to conquer Japan
학생이 쓴 원문
At that time no Koreans were joyful to the cultural import from japan due to its powerful financing abilty and worrying overwelming influence to the Korea culture. The Korea president Kim Dae jung was harshely critisized by its press and folks even called he is a betrait of Korea.
But as it opened, the exactly oppose things happen. BoA, 14 years old Korean females singer sweeped Oracon Chart, Japanese Billboard chart, so to speak, for more than 6 weeks in a row and even praised as post Amuro Namie.
In TV, Korean soap opera Winter Sonata made by Korea Broadcasting System successfully made a thousand million of hardcore fans charming 30, 40, 50, even 60 year-old women.
강사 첨삭
At that time no Koreans were joyful to the cultural import from japan due to its powerful financing abilty and worrying overwelming influence to the Korea culture.
>>At that time none of the Koreans were joyful about the cultural import from japan due to its powerful financing and worried about the overwhelming influence on korean culture.
The Korea president Kim Dae jung was harshely critisized by its press and folks even called he is a betrait of Korea.
>>The Korean president Kim Dae jung was harshly criticized by the press and folks and was even called he is a traitor of Korea.
But as it opened, the exactly oppose things happen.
>>But as it happened, the exactly opposite happened.
BoA, 14 years old Korean females singer sweeped Oracon Chart, Japanese Billboard chart, so to speak, for more than 6 weeks in a row and even praised as post Amuro Namie.
>>BoA, a 14 year old Korean female singer swept the Oracon Chart, Japanese Billboard chart, so to speak, for more than 6 weeks in a row and was even praised as the post Amuro Namie.
In TV, Korean soap opera Winter Sonata made by Korea Broadcasting System successfully made a thousand million of hardcore fans charming 30, 40, 50, even 60 year-old women.
>>On TV, the Korean soap opera Winter Sonata made by Korea Broadcasting System successfully made millions of hardcore fans charming 30, 40, 50, even 60 year-old women.
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