Korean wave 'Hanlyu' ready to conquer Japan 3
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Not only 1492 conquer but 1910 annexation started by japan's greed. An Economically Fast-rising country Japan thanks to widely opened its economy to hold the advanced country's technology and culture, made a plan to conquer all of the Asain countries. Therefore, the closest country of japan was the first target of the plan. As a result, Japan's barbarian nationalism had annexed Korea for 36 years until it gets two nuclear bombs in series by USA which was furied by Pearl Harbor sudden attack.
Ironically, Korea take a revenge to japan for the first time in a century. Of course not with armarment but Korean culture. The two country had started its interaction of cultures 15 years ago.
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Not only 1492 conquer but 1910 annexation started by japan's greed.
>>Not only was korea conquered in 1492 but also 1910 the annexation started by japan's greed.
An Economically Fast-rising country Japan thanks to widely opened its economy to hold the advanced country's technology and culture, made a plan to conquer all of the Asain countries.
>>An Economically Fast-rising country Japan thanks to a widely opened economy to hold the advanced country's technology and culture, made a plan to conquer all of the Asain countries.
Therefore, the closest country of japan was the first target of the plan.
>>correct
As a result, Japan's barbarian nationalism had annexed Korea for 36 years until it gets two nuclear bombs in series by USA which was furied by Pearl Harbor sudden attack.
>>As a result, Japan's barbarian nationalism had annexed Korea for 36 years until it got two nuclear bombs in series by USA which was furied by the Pearl Harbor sudden attack.
>>Ironically, Korea took revenge against japan for the first time in a century.
Of course not with armarment but Korean culture. The two country had started its interaction of cultures 15 years ago.
>>Of course not with armament but Korean culture. The two countries had started its interaction of cultures 15 years ago.Ironically, Korea take a revenge to japan for the first time in a century.
>>Ironically, Korea took revenge against japan for the first time in a century.
Of course not with armarment but Korean culture. The two country had started its interaction of cultures 15 years ago.
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