Korean wave 'Hanlyu' ready to conquer Japan 4
학생이 쓴 원문
Those women even said that they fell in love with Bae Young Jun, the main actor of Winter Sonata. Mr. [Name] is still treated as a god in Japan with its name of Yonsama. (Sama is a term to be used for those who one want to worship or praise)
Last wednesday, following Kara, Korea's popular girl group, Girls Generation which is the big iconic girl group in Korea made a debut in Japan with drawing more than 20,000 Japaneses at their first concert in Jpan. Ironically 2010 has been exacltly 100 year since Japan compulsarily annexed Korea. It seem that Korea, the country of peace-loving and polite, is revenging to Japan tacitly by their culture. It remains to be seen how far the Korean wave(Hallyu)is willing to go in Japan.
강사 첨삭
Those women even said that they fell in love with Bae Young Jun, the main actor of Winter Sonata.
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Mr. [Name] is still treated as a god in Japan with its name of Yonsama. (Sama is a term to be used for those who one want to worship or praise)
>>correct
Last wednesday, following Kara, Korea's popular girl group, Girls Generation which is the big iconic girl group in Korea made a debut in Japan with drawing more than 20,000 Japaneses at their first concert in Jpan.
>>Last wednesday, following Kara, Korea's popular girl group, Girls Generation which is a big iconic girl group in Korea made a debut in Japan with drawing more than 20,000 Japanese at their first concert in Japan.
Ironically 2010 has been exacltly 100 year since Japan compulsarily annexed Korea.
>>correct
It seem that Korea, the country of peace-loving and polite, is revenging to Japan tacitly by their culture.
>>It seems that Korea, the country of peace-loving and polite people, is having revenge on Japan tacitly by their culture.
It remains to be seen how far the Korean wave(Hallyu)is willing to go in Japan.
>>correct
>>Last wednesday, following Kara, Korea's popular girl group, Girls Generation which is a big iconic girl group in Korea made a debut in Japan with drawing more than 20,000 Japanese at their first concert in Japan.
Ironically 2010 has been exacltly 100 year since Japan compulsarily annexed Korea.
>>correct
It seem that Korea, the country of peace-loving and polite, is revenging to Japan tacitly by their culture.
>>It seems that Korea, the country of peace-loving and polite people, is having revenge on Japan tacitly by their culture.
It remains to be seen how far the Korean wave(Hallyu)is willing to go in Japan.
>>correct
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