Korean Winter season
학생이 쓴 원문
South Korea is four season country.
When become the summer it\'s very hot, and become the winter it\'s really really cold.
And we should changed a clothes when the changed the season.
In the winter, Korea people they are gonna be made a kimchi.
It\'s very traditionally from the long time ago.
Buy the cabbages and put the salt with the spicy sauce.
Usaually made a kimchi, with cooked a boiled pork.
Eat with boiled pork and kimchi, it\'s so delicious.
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Hi Ann:)
It sound like people like to hibernate there in South Korea during winter. hahaha! I wish I can experience the winter season there in too. :)
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South Korea is four season country.
>> South Korea has four seasons.
When become the summer it\'s very hot, and become the winter it\'s really really cold.
>> When summer comes, it becomes very hot. And when it\'s winter, it becomes very cold.
And we should changed a clothes when the changed the season.
>> We should change clothes according to the season.
In the winter, Korea people they are gonna be made a kimchi.
>> During winter, Koreans usually make kimchi.
It\'s very traditionally from the long time ago.
>> It\'s part of tradition from long time ago.
Buy the cabbages and put the salt with the spicy sauce.
>> They buy cabbages and put some salt in it as well as some spicy sauce.
Usaually made a kimchi, with cooked a boiled pork.
>> They usually make kimchi and cook boiled pork.
Eat with boiled pork and kimchi, it\'s so delicious.
>> It\'s usually so delicious.
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