krein. long time no see.
학생이 쓴 원문
hello? Krein.
I feel like it's been a long time since we'd met.
How was your days off?
I think you love korea's thanks giving days. Hahaha.
Anyway.. I'll send you homeworks one by one from now on.
I hope i can finish this not too late.
Ok. Lets start!
Don't you judge a book by its cover?
- I wish i could not judge a book by it's cover, but sometimes i do.
I realized that i have a bad bias about the catholic lately, even though I don't know about the bible well. What it came from?
On a second thought, i know that it came from the memories in my teenager.
I heard bad rumors about the catholic. That gave me a bad image. It's could be violent to others. I am so sorry now. Biya Han, she makes me know that was a prejudice. Thanks to her.
i think i have more biases even don't realize i've already had.
That will be real homeworks to me.
강사 첨삭
Greetings, [이름]!
You sure know how to welcome me warmly. Thank you very much.
You\'re so dear to me; I love it when you share just about anything. I am all ears at all times.
This is just one of your compositions, my dear, so I\'ll catch you again on the next one. Don\'t worry about judging a book by its cover. We are all guilty of doing that, it has become kind of normal. The thing here is that we should not voice it out when we know it could hurt others. What do you think?
Catch you on the next board!
-Klein-
hello? Krein.
>>Hello, Klein.I feel like it\'s been a long time since we\'d met.
>>CorrectHow was your days off?
>>How were your days off?I think you love korea\'s thanks giving days. Hahaha.>>I think you love Korean thanksgiving days.Anyway.. I\'ll send you homeworks one by one from now on.
>>Anyway, I\'ll send you my homework one by one from now on.I hope i can finish this not too late.
>>I hope I can finish this in time.Ok. Lets start!>>Correct (Let\'s)Don\'t you judge a book by its cover?- I wish i could not judge a book by it\'s cover, but sometimes i do.
>>CorrectI realized that i have a bad bias about the catholic lately, even though I don\'t know about the bible well. What it came from?
>>I realized I am biased about Catholicism lately, even though I don\'t know about the Bible well like where it came from?On a second thought, i know that it came from the memories in my teenager.
>>CorrectI heard bad rumors about the catholic.
>>Correct
OR >> I heard bad rumors about Catholics.
That gave me a bad image.
>>Correct
It\'s could be violent to others. I am so sorry now.
>>It could be violent to others, so I\'m so sorry now.
Biya Han, she makes me know that was a prejudice. Thanks to her.>>Correct!
i think i have more biases even don\'t realize i\'ve already had.
>>I think I have more biases even though I don\'t realize I\'ve already had them.That will be real homeworks to me.
>>That will be real homework to me.
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