kristel!
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher's day song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b4bRUE15CF8&feature=player_detailpage
Tears (is very high range.)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7x1HC0bShw&feature=player_detailpage
^^Thank you for listening
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this link with me. I appreciate it. I will try listening to it when I have the chance. See you in class!
T.Kristel
Here are the corrections:
Teacher's day song>>Correct!http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b4bRUE15CF8&feature=player_detailpage>>Correct!Tears (is very high range.)>>Tears (it has a very high pitch)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7x1HC0bShw&feature=player_detailpage>>Correct!^^Thank you for listening
>>Correct!
>>put a period (.) after the sentence.
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