KTX Trip
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Do you know KTX? The mean of KTX is a abbreviation of Korea Train Express.
I.am going to Gwangju city at south west area in Korea.
I will meet two distributors. One is a old company, another is a new company.
As I said, I had a lot of stress from these distributor.
Today, I could obtain nothing with them, my boss said that he will show a courtesy to listen from them. It will not change anything. He don\'t expect to change something from them.
Frankly, I have to do nothing today.
I go there with my boss & senior director.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]
I.am going to Gwangju city at south west area in Korea.
I will meet two distributors. One is a old company, another is a new company.
As I said, I had a lot of stress from these distributor.
Today, I could obtain nothing with them, my boss said that he will show a courtesy to listen from them. It will not change anything. He don\'t expect to change something from them.
Frankly, I have to do nothing today.
I go there with my boss & senior director.
See you later in our class.
T. DON
Do you know KTX? The mean of KTX is a abbreviation of Korea Train Express.
>> Do you know KTX? KTX is the abbreviation of Korea Train Express.
I.am going to Gwangju city at south west area in Korea.
>> I am going to Gwangju city in the south west area of Korea.
I will meet two distributors. One is a old company, another is a new company.
>> I will meet two distributors. One is from old company, another is from a new company.
As I said, I had a lot of stress from these distributor.
>> As I said, I had a lot of stress from these distributors.
Today, I could obtain nothing with them, my boss said that he will show a courtesy to listen from them. It will not change anything. He don\'t expect to change something from them.
>> Today, I could obtain nothing from them, my boss said that he will show courtesy and listen to them. It will not change anything. He doesn\'t expect some changes from them.
Frankly, I have to do nothing today.
>> Frankly, I have nothing to do today.
I go there with my boss & senior director.
>> I will go there with my boss & senior director.
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