l didn\'t know English writting service

2019-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Wow l will write dairy every day Wednesday i bought car So i took a car on higway That\'s so scared experience ever I delayed the class but didn\'t call me yesterday l planted lemon seed Now they are sprout Wow that\'s mother nature

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름],

Do write your diary every day in English. I\'d be more than happy to help you correct your mistakes. Let\'s talk later!(\',)

~Lynn

Wow l will write dairy every day

>> Wow, I will write my diary every day.
 Wednesday i bought car So i took a car on higway 

>> On Wednesday, I bought a car so I drove the car to the highway.
 That\'s so scared experience ever

>> That\'s the scariest experience ever.
 I delayed the class but didn\'t call me

>> I delayed our class so you didn\'t call me.
 yesterday l planted lemon seed

>> Yesterday, I planted a lemon seed.
 Now they are sprout 

>> Now, it sprouted.
 Wow that\'s mother nature

>> Wow, mother nature is amazing!

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