labor union is necessary to improve their working circumstance.

2020-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Is a labor union necessary in a company? Yes.sure it is. The first reason why labor union is necessary is that you can have a power fighting with company. You know every company first value is making a benefit. They always thinks about labor as expensive not friend, not colleague. So every company wants to pay the money to labor as little as they can. And company has much power that each person. So If you stay alone, you will receive a bad treatment from company. So if you want to have a good treatment from company you should have power to fight with company. To make a power people should make a union. One person have no enough power but if they have make a union they can have a power. So labor union is necessary to improve their working circumstance.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir JY! Thank you once again for this. Yes, that is the purpose of a labor union.

- T. Beth
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Yes.sure it is.

>>> OR: Yes, it definitely is.
The first reason why labor union is necessary is that you can have a power fighting with company.

>>> correct
You know every company first value is making a benefit.

>>> OR: You know that every company prioritizes making a profit.

They always thinks about labor as expensive not friend, not colleague.

>>> They always thinks about labor as expenses not a friend nor a colleague.

So every company wants to pay the money to labor as little as they can.

>>> correct

>>> So every company wants to compensate labor as little as possible.

And company has much power that each person.

>>> And the company has more power than each person.

So If you stay alone, you will receive a bad treatment from company.

>>> So, if you stand alone, you will receive a bad treatment from the company.

So if you want to have a good treatment from company you should have power to fight with company.

>>> So if you want to have a good treatment from the company, you should have power to fight against the company.

To make a power people should make a union.

>>> OR: To have that power, people should make a union.

One person have no enough power but if they have make a union they can have a power.

>>> One person does not have enough power but if they have a union they can have power.

So labor union is necessary to improve their working circumstance.

>>> correct

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