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2019-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Hi. Lainey It is good day today. It is too cold in here. I have been learning english for three month. I am afaid of studing but I am enjoying now. If i study hard,i will be able to be fluent in speaking in English. Thank you very much for teaching me. Please cheer me on next year. I will expect for the class. I hope you have a lot of fun with your family on weekend. I will meet you next Wednesday. Happy new year Good bye. Anny..

강사 첨삭

Hi Anny ^^


I\'m glad you had a good day. Well, use your gloves if its too cold. Don\'t leave it in your office :)))

Good job! You know everything that we do is difficult at the start but when you get the hang of it then you will enjoy. Just like what\'s happening now you said you were afraid but look at you now?

You are now enjoying and you are getting better day by day :)))

You are a very good student I can see how hard you work and as you continue doing what you are doing? I am pretty sure you will get to where you want to be :)))

My family and I had so much fun last weekend. I hope you did too.

See you in class...\\m/...


By the way excellent job using your periods or your stops ( . ) You make me so proud :)))


T. Lainey <\",)))><


It is good day today. It is too cold in here.

>>> It is a good day today. >>> correct


 I have been learning english for three month.

>>> I have been learning English for three months now.


 I am afaid of studing but I am enjoying now.

>>> I was afraid of studying but I am now enjoying.


 If i study hard,i will be able to be fluent in speaking in English.

>>> If I study hard, I will be able to be fluent in speaking in English.


 Thank you very much for teaching me.

>>> correct


 Please cheer me on next year.

>>> Please cheer me up next year.


 I will expect for the class.

>>> correct


 I hope you have a lot of fun with your family on weekend.

>>> correct


 I will meet you next Wednesday.

>>> correct


 Happy new year Good bye.

>>> correct

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