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2020-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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And I felt like studying English more. In the future, although I have finished taking classes, To improve my English, I will study more fields that I am interested in and want to study more through this program. I\'ve been told that the number of viruses appearing is increasing as the environment becomes polluted. Therefore, I believe that investment in microbiological research will increase in the future. I also think it is an essential study that we should do. Although Korea is not as active as other countries, the bio industry is likely to be boosted by the Covid-19. In that respect, it was good to know the Rna viruses called Ebola detailed history and process through this lecture. thank you for collect the grammar ! it is last of my homework! !

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Hi [이름],
Woah, more homework eh! It\'s nice though. It\'s good for practicing your writing skills.
-Rachel
And I felt like studying English more.
>> correct
 In the future, although I have finished taking classes, To improve my English, I will study more fields that I am interested in and want to study more through this program.
>> Although I have finished taking classes, I will study more fields that I am interested in to improve my English, and in the future I want to study more through this program.
I\'ve been told that the number of viruses appearing is increasing as the environment becomes polluted.
>> correct
 Therefore, I believe that investment in microbiological research will increase in the future. I also think it is an essential study that we should do.
>> correct
 Although Korea is not as active as other countries, the bio industry is likely to be boosted by the Covid-19.
>> correct
 In that respect, it was good to know the Rna viruses called Ebola detailed history and process through this lecture.
>> In respect to that, it was good to know about the RNA viruses called Ebola and its detailed history and processes through this lecture?
thank you for collect the grammar ! it is last of my homework! !
>> Thank you for correcting the grammar. It is my last homework!

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