Last class homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Write about who are you?
A. I am always smile and have many friends but I\'m not passionate and I don\'t like group activity I want to learn many languages but It\'s very hard.
If I will have opportunity I want to live foreign country. it can help my life so I need to a lot make money
강사 첨삭
I am always smile and have many friends but I\'m not passionate and I don\'t like group activity I want to learn many languages but It\'s very hard.
>> I always smile and I have many friends but I am not really passionate about having group activities. I would like to learn many languages but it is very hard.
If I will have opportunity I want to live foreign country.
>> If I will have an opportunity, I want to live in a foreign country.
it can help my life so I need to a lot make money
>> It can help me have a better life so I can earn a lot of money.
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