Last Classs with teacher Kris
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Thank you too for participating in our classes.
You participated well. You shared your thoughts and opinions about our topics. :)
I treasure all of your stories that you shared. :)
I enjoyed every single moment that we had in our class especially when you shared jokes or
when you were in a good mood that made the atmosphere of our class full of joy and energy. :)
You are such an amazing kid with intelligence, skills, and talents. Polish those
gifts that you have and make it better until you reach the best. :)
Do not stop learning and make your dreams come true.
Obey your parents and don\'t make your mother stressed or angry.
She knows what is best for you. :)
Thank you so much for everything.
I respect your decision. ^^
Always take care. :)
I will miss you. :( :( :(
~~ Teacher Kris
Hi,teacher Kris.
>> Hi Teacher Kris,
We have a bad news.
>> Correct
It was last class with you.
>> Today is my last class with you.
We had class almost one year.
>> We had our class for almost a year.
I am sorry.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I apologize.
OR:
>> My apology.
I want to have a experience with another teacher so I changed teacher.
>> I want to have experiences with another teachers so I changed my teacher.
I was no interst so I said many jokes.
>> I was not interested in our class so I made many jokes.
I am really sorry to you because our class wasn\'t very happy.
>> I am really sorry that our class was not happy anymore.
I think Powerenglish class is communicate with forien teacher with fun.
>> I think at Power English, communicating with a foreign teacher is with a lot of fun.
But it was not at our class.
>> But, it was not in our class.
I hope we see you soon.
>> Correct
I said you to crispy chicken and sometimes make you angry and feel bad.
>> I called you crispy chicken and sometimes it made you angry and feel bad.
I will don\'t do that with next teacher.
>> I will not do it to the next teacher.
I am so sorry.
>> Correct
Everybody said first meet is great but last meet is sad.
>> Everybody said that first meeting is great but last meeting is sad.
I want to say thank you to you.
>> I want to say. \"Thank you\".
I think you don\'t interst at my baseball diray.
>> I think you were not interested about my baseball diary.
But you check diary and cheer up KIATigers and make an effort.
>> But, you still checked my diary and cheer up to KIA Tigers and made an effort.
ITeacher I am really sorry.
>> Teacher, I am really sorry.
I will not make someone\'s feel bad.
>> I will not make someone feel bad.
You made an effort..I will focus on next class.
>> You made an effort and I will focus in our next class.
Kris teacher I am really sorry.
>> Teacher Kris, I am really sorry.
Always take care,and when I have a chance to go to the [이름]ippines.
>> Always take care and when I have the chance to go to the [이름]ippines then...........
Now let\'s don\'t think of previous bad mood.
>> Now, let us not think of our previous bad mood.
Teacher Kris I am so sorry.
>> Teacher Kris, I am sorry.
[이름]
>> Yours truly,
[이름]
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