Last Classs with teacher Kris

2016-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Hi,teacher Kris.We have a bad news.It was last class with you.We had class almost one year.I am sorry.I want to have a experience with another teacher so I changed teacher. I was no interst so I said many jokes.I am really sorry to you because our class wasn't very happy.I think Powerenglish class is communicate with forien teacher with fun.But it was not at our class.I hope we see you soon.I said you to crispy chicken and sometimes make you angry and feel bad.I will don't do that with next teacher.I am so sorry.Everybody said first meet is great but last meet is sad.I want to say thank you to you.I think you don't interst at my baseball diray.But you check diary and cheer up KIATigers and make an effort.ITeacher I am really sorry.I will not make someone's feel bad.You made an effort..I will focus on next class. Kris teacher I am really sorry. Always take care,and when I have a chance to go to the [이름]ippines.Now let's don't think of previous bad mood. Teacher Kris I am so sorry.[이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Thank you too for participating in our classes.

You participated well. You shared your thoughts and opinions about our topics. :)

I treasure all of your stories that you shared. :)

I enjoyed every single moment that we had in our class especially when you shared jokes or

when you were in a good mood that made the atmosphere of our class full of joy and energy. :)

You are such an amazing kid with intelligence, skills, and talents. Polish those

gifts that you have and make it better until you reach the best. :)

Do not stop learning and make your dreams come true.

Obey your parents and don\'t make your mother stressed or angry.

She knows what is best for you. :)

Thank you so much for everything.

I respect your decision. ^^

Always take care. :)

I will miss you. :( :( :(


~~ Teacher Kris



Hi,teacher Kris.

>> Hi Teacher Kris,

We have a bad news.

>> Correct

It was last class with you.

>> Today is my last class with you.

We had class almost one year.

>> We had our class for almost a year.

I am sorry.

>> Correct

OR:

>> I apologize.

OR:

>> My apology.

I want to have a experience with another teacher so I changed teacher.

>> I want to have experiences with another teachers so I changed my teacher.

I was no interst so I said many jokes.

>> I was not interested in our class so I made many jokes.

I am really sorry to you because our class wasn\'t very happy.

>> I am really sorry that our class was not happy anymore.

I think Powerenglish class is communicate with forien teacher with fun.

>> I think at Power English, communicating with a foreign teacher is with a lot of fun.

But it was not at our class.

>> But, it was not in our class.

I hope we see you soon.

>> Correct

I said you to crispy chicken and sometimes make you angry and feel bad.

>> I called you crispy chicken and sometimes it made you angry and feel bad.

I will don\'t do that with next teacher.

>> I will not do it to the next teacher.

I am so sorry.

>> Correct

Everybody said first meet is great but last meet is sad.

>> Everybody said that first meeting is great but last meeting is sad.

I want to say thank you to you.

>> I want to say. \"Thank you\".

I think you don\'t interst at my baseball diray.

>> I think you were not interested about my baseball diary.

But you check diary and cheer up KIATigers and make an effort.

>> But, you still checked my diary and cheer up to KIA Tigers and made an effort.

ITeacher I am really sorry.

>> Teacher, I am really sorry.

I will not make someone\'s feel bad.

>> I will not make someone feel bad.

You made an effort..I will focus on next class.

>> You made an effort and I will focus in our next class.
 Kris teacher I am really sorry.

>> Teacher Kris, I am really sorry.
 Always take care,and when I have a chance to go to the [이름]ippines.

>> Always take care and when I have the chance to go to the [이름]ippines then...........

Now let\'s don\'t think of previous bad mood.

>> Now, let us not think of our previous bad mood.
 Teacher Kris I am so sorry.

>> Teacher Kris, I am sorry.

[이름]

>> Yours truly,

     [이름]

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