last crime
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I haven`t heard of crime lately except for the light crime of corona.
When using public transportation everyone has to wear a mask
But the bus driver told the passenger that he had to wear a mask get on the bus\'
He assaulted the driver.
He was drunk maybe the article`s words made him upset.
I think many people are getting tired and sensitive because of the virus
But the damage is too great for one person to call it a small crime.
Summer in Korea the humidity is high, so it is hard for many people to wear masks.
He has been arrested, but I don`t know exactly what he was punished for.
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Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for doing your homework. You did great. Keep up the good work. Have a great weekend and see you next week. - T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
I haven`t heard of crime lately except for the light crime of corona.
I haven`t heard of crime lately except for the light crime of corona.
>> I haven\'t heard of any crime lately except for Coronavirus.
When using public transportation everyone has to wear a mask
>> CORRECT
He assaulted the driver.
>> When the bus driver told a passenger to wear a mask before getting in the bus, the passenger assaulted the driver.
>> He was drunk that is why the driver\'s words upset him.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Summer in Korea the humidity is high, so it is hard for many people to wear masks.
>> Summer in Korea is hard because of humidity, it is hard for many people to wear masks.
>> He was arrested but I don\'t know exactly what punishment he received.
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