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2026-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi, Jeny It\'s last of class already too fast!! When i have a freetime and after organize my schedule I will return. Thank you always See you ! 1) President of Korea is going to jail. because of he was insurrection with he\'s people. 2) Everyone has one\'s own philosophy. 3) He mistake everytime to he\'s girlfriend

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Hello Jon

Determination and perseverance move the world; thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In your case I know that you are determined to improve your skills in English.
T. Jeny  

Hi, Jeny
>>correct
It\'s last of class already too fast!!
>>It is our last day of class. Time is too fast!
When i have a freetime and after organize my schedule
>>When I have free time, I will organize my schedule.
I will return. Thank you always See you !
>>correct
1) President of Korea is going to jail. because of he was insurrection with he\'s people.
>>The president of Korea is going to jail because of insurrection.
2) Everyone has one\'s own philosophy.
>>Everyone has their own philosophy.
3) He mistake everytime to he\'s girlfriend
>>He makes mistakes to his girlfriend all the time.

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