Last Friday

2017-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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I hang out with my friends last Friday. One of my friend is really nervous as he is waiting for result of a job interview of the company he really want to join. Otherwise, he will have to work at small business in Vietnam. It seems like passing the job interview is quite difficult because he've failed to get a job for 2 years. Anyway the result wasn't published yet, we may know the result this week. We went to a restaurant famous for its skewered lamb well-suited when drinking chinese alcohol. There is "the street of skewered lamb" 10 minutes away from my house. As one restaurant is really crowded. we have to put us on a waiting list, even though they opened a branch near the main office. finally we went to another restaurant because we had to wait for a long time.

강사 첨삭


Hi [이름]!!


Wow!! skewered lamb!! Yumm!!


REMEMBER:

Uses of the article \"THE\"

The definite article ‘the’ is used in the following cases.


1. When a singular noun represents a whole class.

The camel is a beast of burden. (Here the singular noun camel is used to refer to all the camels.)

Note that when a plural noun is used to talk about things in general, articles are usually omitted.

Camels are beasts of burden.
Computers are expensive.


2. While speaking of something or somebody already referred to

The boy who came to see me yesterday was my brother.
The story that he told us yesterday was very interesting.


3. While speaking of a particular person or thing

The poor beggar could get no alms.


4. When you refer to classics and holy books

Examples are: The Ramayana; The Mahabharata; The Iliad

Note that when the author’s name is mentioned with the book, the article is usually omitted.

Homer’s Iliad (NOT Homer’s the Iliad)


5. While referring to the names of journals and newspapers

The New York Times
The Wall Street Journal


6. When we refer to imaginary geographical lines

Examples are: The equator; the Tropic of Cancer; the Tropic of Capricorn; the latitude; the longitude


~Teacher Megan~


HERE ARE MY CORRECTTIONS:


I hang out with my friends last Friday.

>> Correct.


One of my friend is really nervous as he is waiting for result of a job interview of the company he really want to join.

>> One of my friend is really nervous as he is waiting for the result of a job interview on the company he really want to join in.

 

Otherwise, he will have to work at small business in Vietnam.

>> Otherwise, he will have to work at a small business in Vietnam.


It seems like passing the job interview is quite difficult because he\'ve failed to get a job for 2 years.

>> It seem that passing the job interview is quite difficult because he\'ve failed to get a job for 2 years.


Anyway the result wasn\'t published yet, we may know the result this week.

>> Correct.


 We went to a restaurant famous for its skewered lamb well-suited when drinking chinese alco
hol.

>> Correct.


There is \"the street of skewered lamb\" 10 minutes away from my house.

>> Correct.


As one restaurant is really crowded.

>> Each restaurants are really crowded.


 we have to put us on a waiting list, even though they opened a branch near the main office.

>>  they have to put us on a waiting list, even though they opened a branch near the main office.


finally we went to another restaurant because we had to wait for a long time.

>> finally we went to another restaurant because we don\'t want to wait for a long time.

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