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I like to ride bicycle. This season is very nice weather to ride cycle and I learned badminton at sports center in olympic park.
If I work overseas, whenever I have free time I will enjoy outdoor actvity like badminton, swimming and cycling. I want to teach korean language to local people.I will consist a class studying a korean language and I will teach to them about korean traditional food. These day I learn korean language teaching skill and a cooking class for prepare teaching local people.
Q3)What was your recent problem?
It was 6 months ago maybe. as you know I am 55 years old. All financial company in korea should lay off to their employee. So many korean institutes will lay off when the employee age are 55 year old man in korean age. So my original retirement period was july this
year. but suddeniy my company order to quit the job at January this year. It was a sudden thing to me. My elder son got marriaged at April.
I arranged the wedding date at April.
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for the update! This goes to show your passion to learn. Keep up the good work and see you on Monday! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>I like riding a bicycle. This season has very nice weather for bicycle rides. I also learned badminton at a sports center in the Olympic park.
If I work overseas, whenever I have free time I will enjoy outdoor activities like badminton, swimming and cycling.
If I work overseas, whenever I have free time I will enjoy outdoor activities like badminton, swimming and cycling.
>>CORRECT!
I want to teach the Korean language to local people.
>>CORRECT!
I will consist a class studying a korean language and I will teach to them about korean traditional food.
>>I will organize a Korean language class and I will also teach them about Korean traditional food.
These day I learn korean language teaching skill and a cooking class for prepare teaching local people.
>>These days, I\'m learning Korean language teaching skills and cooking skills to prepare myself for teaching the local people.
Q3)What was your recent problem?
It was 6 months ago maybe.
>>CORRECT!
as you know, I am 55 years old.
>>CORRECT!
All financial company in korea should lay off to their employee.
>>All financial companies had to lay off their employees.
So many korean institutes will lay off when the employee age are 55 year old man in korean age.
>>Many Korean institutions often lay off their employees when they reach the Korean age of 55.
So my original retirement period was july this year. but suddeniy my company order to quit the job at January this year.
>>My original retirement date was supposed to be in July this year but I was made to quit in January instead by my company.
It was a sudden thing to me.
>>CORRECT!
My elder son got marriaged at April.
>>My elder son got married in April.
I arranged the wedding date at April.
I arranged the wedding date at April.
>>I set the wedding day in April.
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