last homework : How much do you appreciate your life now?

Hi there [이름]!

That\'s the spirit!

If you think that you are not lucky enough and that you have problems, just think that there are some people who are unluckier than you.

You have to appreciate what you have every time..

You will not know that someday, you will also achieve things that you want to have. Isn\'t it?
Anyway, thanks for your time!

Take care!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

I realized that there are many people to have trouble than me.

>> I realized that there are many people who are more in trouble than me.

so i alway appreciate my life.

>> So I always appreciate my life.

sometimes, I am distressed. Because i am poor.

>> Sometimes, I am distressed because I am poor.

i work to earn my living expenses while i study in college.

>> I am working to earn my living expenses while I am studying in college.

It is hard to do together at the same time.

>> It is hard to do two things at the same time.

That will make me more mature. 

>> correct!
 I am young.

>> correct!

i am healthy.

>> correct!

 i have a dream.

>> correct!

i have a boyfriend who truly loves me.

>> correct!

i have a precious family.

>> correct!

I am satisfied with my life.

>> correct!

i appreciate my life very much now!

  >> correct!