last monday, I had a party with my coworkers

2014-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. He is speaking to me. (I) 2. We are playing with them. (they) 3. I don't understand him. (he) 4. They don't know us. (we) 5. He didn't tell me_. (I) 6. They are very proud of her. (she) 7. I recognize it. (it) 8. His parents love him. (he) 9. Have you seen them? (they) 10. They called _us. (we) last monday, I had a party with my coworkers we went to restaurant where samgyubsal is sold. I ate a lot because we pay it equally, It is beneficial for me to eat a lot. More eat, More money I earn. That day, the title of the party was position exchange. I was the main of the party. I had a speach. My coworkers gave me lots of alchol. So It was hard to stay awake. I decided to go home. I got taxi. when I arrived near my home I threw up all thing which I ate. It was hard time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Thank you for sending this tonight.

Excellent! You got a perfect score! Keep up the good work!

Can you tell me about your speech in class?

I am curious about the name of the restaurant.

I hope that there will be a Korean buffet restaurant in my city.

See you on Monday! Take Care!

Teacher Nina


1. He is speaking to me. (I)
>> Correct!
2. We are playing with them. (they)
>> Correct! 
3. I don\'t understand him. (he)
>> Correct! 
4. They don\'t know us. (we)
>> Correct! 
5. He didn\'t tell me_. (I)
>> Correct! 
6. They are very proud of her. (she)
>> Correct! 
7. I recognize it. (it)
>> Correct! 
8. His parents love him. (he)
>> Correct! 
9. Have you seen them? (they)
>> Correct! 
10. They called _us. (we)
>> Correct! 


last monday, I had a party with my coworkers

>> Correct! (Capitalize the first letter of your sentence. ^^)
we went to restaurant where samgyubsal is sold.

>> We went to a restaurant where \"Samgyeopsal\" is sold.
I ate a lot because we pay it equally, It is beneficial for me to eat a lot.

>> I ate a lot because we paid it equally, It is beneficial for me to eat a lot.
More eat, More money I earn.

>> The more I eat, the more money I earn.
That day, the title of the party was position exchange.

>> Did you mean: On that day. the game of the party was changing of positions.
I was the main of the party.

>> Did you mean: I was the most important person in the party.
I had a speach.

>> I gave a speech.
My coworkers gave me lots of alchol.

>> Correct ( Spelling check: alcohol ^^ )

>> OR: My colleagues gave a me a lot of alcohol.
So It was hard to stay awake.

>> So, it was hard for me to stay awake.
I decided to go home.

>> Correct

I got taxi.

>> I got a taxi.
when I arrived near my home I threw up all thing which I ate.

>> When I arrived nearby my home, I threw up the food I ate.

>> OR: When I reached the place nearby my home, I vomited the food that I ate.
It was hard time.

>> I had hard time.

>> OR: I had a difficult time.

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