last monday, I had a party with my coworkers
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Thank you for sending this tonight.
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Can you tell me about your speech in class?
I am curious about the name of the restaurant.
I hope that there will be a Korean buffet restaurant in my city.
See you on Monday! Take Care!
Teacher Nina
1. He is speaking to me. (I)
>> Correct!
2. We are playing with them. (they)
>> Correct!
3. I don\'t understand him. (he)
>> Correct!
4. They don\'t know us. (we)
>> Correct!
5. He didn\'t tell me_. (I)
>> Correct!
6. They are very proud of her. (she)
>> Correct!
7. I recognize it. (it)
>> Correct!
8. His parents love him. (he)
>> Correct!
9. Have you seen them? (they)
>> Correct!
10. They called _us. (we)
>> Correct!
last monday, I had a party with my coworkers
>> Correct! (Capitalize the first letter of your sentence. ^^)
we went to restaurant where samgyubsal is sold.
>> We went to a restaurant where \"Samgyeopsal\" is sold.
I ate a lot because we pay it equally, It is beneficial for me to eat a lot.
>> I ate a lot because we paid it equally, It is beneficial for me to eat a lot.
More eat, More money I earn.
>> The more I eat, the more money I earn.
That day, the title of the party was position exchange.
>> Did you mean: On that day. the game of the party was changing of positions.
I was the main of the party.
>> Did you mean: I was the most important person in the party.
I had a speach.
>> I gave a speech.
My coworkers gave me lots of alchol.
>> Correct ( Spelling check: alcohol ^^ )
>> OR: My colleagues gave a me a lot of alcohol.
So It was hard to stay awake.
>> So, it was hard for me to stay awake.
I decided to go home.
>> Correct
I got taxi.
>> I got a taxi.
when I arrived near my home I threw up all thing which I ate.
>> When I arrived nearby my home, I threw up the food I ate.
>> OR: When I reached the place nearby my home, I vomited the food that I ate.
It was hard time.
>> I had hard time.
>> OR: I had a difficult time.
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