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학생이 쓴 원문
I had a wonderful time of 15 minutes english conversation with my teacher, Lara, who encouraged me to speak English with a confidence. I met a patient having inguinal discomfort in my clinic yesterday. He is from the state of Indiana, USA and married with a korean woman. He is giving a lecture to korean student in the university. I was very pleased to discuss his problems in English. I felt that I have a little bit of confidence to speak english.
I have recorded my conversation from the first session. I don't yet know how much my english is improved. I know, however, someday I will speak english without a hesitation or unnecessary sound like um--, eh--. I'm looking forward to speaking english fluently ASAP. Thank you! Lara.
강사 첨삭
I\'m so glad to hear about your experience with your patient. I\'m sure that you have improved greatly. Doing little conversations in English each day would do a lot on the development of your confidence and skills. So I encourage you to take advantage of each opportunity for you to practice you speaking skills. Anyway, have a wonderful and productive weekend ahead of you.
T. Lara
I had a wonderful time of 15 minutes english conversation with my teacher, Lara, who encouraged me to speak English with a confidence.
>>I had a wonderful 15 minutes English conversation with my teacher, Lara, who encouraged me to speak English confidently.
I met a patient having inguinal discomfort in my clinic yesterday.
>>Correct!
>>I met a patient with inguinal problem in my clinic yesterday.
He is from the state of Indiana, USA and married with a korean woman.
>>He is from the state of Indiana, USA and married to a Korean woman.
He is giving a lecture to korean student in the university.
>>He gives lectures to Korean students in a university.
I was very pleased to discuss his problems in English.
>>Correct!
I felt that I have a little bit of confidence to speak english.
>>I felt that I have a little bit of confidence in speaking English.
I have recorded my conversation from the first session.
>>Correct!
I don\'t yet know how much my english is improved.
>>I don\'t know yet how much my English has improved.
I know, however, someday I will speak english without a hesitation or unnecessary sound like um--, eh--.
>>I know, however, that someday, I will speak English without any hesitation or fillers like um or eh.
I\'m looking forward to speaking english fluently ASAP.
>>I\'m looking forward to speaking English fluently ASAP.
>>I\'m looking forward to fluently speak in English soon.
Thank you! Lara.
>>Thank you Lara!
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