Last night I drunk a lot
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Thanks for dropping by the board Sue!
It was indeed a whale of time with your friends last night. You were right! As we age, our circle of friends become smaller because it is more important to have a quality of friends than quantity of friends. This is great, keep your compositions coming!
~Teacher Eunice
Last night I drunk a lot
so it\'s really hard to write what i think
>>> I drank a lot last night, so it was really hard to write my thoughts.
Yesterday I met my friends and we drank a lot
>>> Yesterday, I met my friends and drank a lot.
Because nowadays we have a lot to do that\'s why I drunk a lot
>>> Because we have a lot to do nowadays that\'s why I drink a lot.
I feel so tired
>>> correct!
I like to get along with people especilly friends who graduated the same high school.
>>> I like to get along with people especially friends who graduated in the same school.
we can share our good memories about our teenagers
that\'s why I like to meet my old friends
>>> We can share our good memories about our childhood that\'s why I like to meet my old friends.
more and more i am older it\'s really hard to make good relationship with people
>>> The older I get the harder it is to make good relationship with people.
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