Last night I drunk a lot

2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Last night I drunk a lot so it's really hard to write what i think Yesterday I met my friends and we drank a lot Because nowadays we have a lot to do that's why I drunk a lot I feel so tired I like to get along with people especilly friends who graduated the same high school. we can share our good memories about our teenagers that's why I like to meet my old friends more and more i am older it's really hard to make good relationship with people

강사 첨삭

Thanks for dropping by the board Sue!

It was indeed a whale of time with your friends last night. You were right! As we age, our circle of friends become smaller because it is more important to have a quality of friends than quantity of friends. This is great, keep your compositions coming!

~Teacher Eunice


Last night I drunk a lot
so it\'s really hard to write what i think

>>> I drank a lot last night, so it was really hard to write my thoughts.

Yesterday I met my friends and we drank a lot

>>> Yesterday, I met my friends and drank a lot.
 Because nowadays we have a lot to do that\'s why I drunk a lot
>>> Because we have a lot to do
nowadays that\'s why I drink a lot.

I feel so tired
>>> correct! 

I like to get along with people especilly friends who graduated the same high school.

>>> I like to get along with people especially friends who graduated in the same school.

we can share our good memories about our teenagers
that\'s why I like to meet my old friends
>>> W
e can share our good memories about our childhood that\'s why I like to meet my old friends. 

more and more i am older it\'s really hard to make good relationship with people

>>> The older I get the harder it is to make good relationship with people.

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