last Sat in couples\' gathering
학생이 쓴 원문
As I told you before, I hung out with my b.f and one of his friend\'s couple. I really anticipated about it before saturday, but it ended up with a lot of disappointment. I thought I know them somehow, but they behaved so weird unlike how they were when we saw each other all together with other people last time. It was quite uncomfortable to watch them kissing all the time and groping each other. I don\'t think I\'m such a conservative person like someone from 19th century, but It was kind of too much. (to be continued tomorrow, cuz I need to go home. hehehehehehehe. )
강사 첨삭
Hi Min!
I can feel your emotions more from your written words.
Everything is detailed and you can really paint a picture.
I want to hear more tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
As I told you before, I hung out with my b.f and one of his friend\'s couple.
>> As I told you before, I hung out with my boyfriend and one of his friends plus the latter\'s girlfriend.
I really anticipated about it before saturday, but it ended up with a lot of disappointment.
>> I was really excited about it before Saturday but I ended up feeling a lot of disappointment.
I thought I know them somehow, but they behaved so weird unlike how they were when we saw each other all together with other people last time.
>> I thought I knew them somehow, but they behaved in such a weird way, unlike how they were when we saw each other all together with other people last time.
It was quite uncomfortable to watch them kissing all the time and groping each other.
>> Correct
I don\'t think I\'m such a conservative person like someone from 19th century, but It was kind of too much.
>> I don\'t think I\'m such a conservative person, like someone from the 19th century, but it was kind of too much.
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