Last Saturday
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Last Saturday, my wife stayed at villa with her friends, so I was at home alone.
>> Last Saturday, my wife stayed at a villa with her friends, so I was at home alone.
I decided to take out pizza and watch movie.
>> Correct.
What I like the most is Domino\'s pizza.
>> Correct.
I used to eat Domino\'s pizza 3 times every month.
>> Correct.
but the choice of today is Pizza Hut.
>> But nowadays I prefer Pizza Hut.
Cause I\'d like to eat more greasy pizza itself.
>> Cause I\'d like to eat more greasy pizza.
I bought new menu which has burger patty on the crust, and there were crunch potatoes and processed jalapeno peppers in the topping.
>> I bought a new menu which has burger patty on the crust, and crunch potatoes and processed jalapeno peppers on top.
it almost tastes like hamburger.
>> Correct.
The movie is \"Sen and Cihiro had lost.\", a Japanese animation.
>> The movie I watched is \"Sen and Cihiro had lost.\", it\'s a Japanese animation.
the most famous director ,Miyazaki Hayao made.
>> the famous director-Miyazaki Hayao made.
next month I\'ll visit his film studio at Tokyo, so I chose it.
>> next month I\'ll be visiting his film studio in Tokyo, so I chose to watch his movie.
it is kind of a growth story of young girl, just 10 years old.
>> It is a story of a young girl, she is just 10 years old.
it showed very fantastic and mystic scene.
>> Correct.
I\'ll try another film of Hayao\'s.
>> Correct.
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