last say that m sorry

2020-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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I said I`m sorry so often I don`t remember when it was the last time. I usually don`t feel so bad, most of them would have done it to my familiy. I often forget for various reasons, childbirth surgical aging, etc. I always go back in when I go out, I leave something behind. And I make mistake as I run errands So I end up apologizing. It`s unfair to be in this situation after all the hard work. But I`m trying to fix it and I`m also trying to accept it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate your effort. You did great. See you in our next class.

Here are your corrections:

I said I`m sorry so often I don`t remember when it was the last time.
>> I\'m saying sorry often so I don\'t remember when was the last time.

I usually don`t feel so bad.
>> CORRECT

most of them would have done it to my familiy.
>> CORRECT; but it should be written like this.
>> Most of them would have done it to my family.

I often forget for various reasons, childbirth surgical aging, etc.
>> I often forget about it because of various reasons like childbirth, surgical, aging, etc.

I always go back in when I go out, I leave something behind.
>> When ever I get in and then get out, I leave something behind.
And I make mistake as I run errands
So I end up apologizing.
>> I make mistakes even if I\'m just running errands so I end up apologizing.

It`s unfair to be in this situation after all the hard work.
>> CORRECT

But I`m trying to fix it and I`m also trying to accept it.
>> CORRECT

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