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Last sunday, We went to another city. Carolyn was on the duty on saturday which is her birthday. So we celebrated the birthday on the sun day. I treated her with her the favorite dish which is crab in soy sauce. She really like it. additionally it is the winter season food, so we think there isn't enough time to eat in summer. We searched an internet and finally we found the restaurant where crab in soy sauce is provided complimentarily, If we pay the fixed price. We had a great dinner. ------------------------- Why some teachers let students sleep in a class? I think there are two reasons. the first one is that the teacher really know a student who is sleeping is very good student but tired. So the teacher doesn't want to bother him/her. teacher already know that person have a potential to achieve an one's goal. But the second one is that the teacher doesn't care a student. the teacher give up the future of the student.

Hi there! Thank you for doing your homework. I enjoyed reading your compositions. You are very good at expressing your thoughts. Keep up the good work. Continue working on the corrections below. May you have a great day and I am looking forward for more great compositions from you. Teacher Nina   Last sunday, We went to another city. >> Correct >> OR: Last Sunday, we went to another city. Carolyn was on the duty on saturday which is her birthday. >> Carolyn was on duty last Saturday which was her birthday.So we celebrated the birthday on the sun day. >> So we celebrated her birthday last Sunday.I treated her with her the favorite dish which is crab in soy sauce. >> I treated her with her favorite dish which was crab in soy sauce.She really like it. >> She really liked it.^^ additionally it is the winter season food, so we think there isn\'t enough time to eat in summer. >> Actually it is good to eat it during the winter season, so we thought it\'s not a good time to eat it during summer.We searched an internet and finally we found the restaurant where crab in soy sauce is provided complimentarily, If we pay the fixed price.>> We searched it on the internet and finally we found a restaurant where crab in soy sauce is served as a complimentary dish, If we pay the fixed price. We had a great dinner. >> correct. Why some teachers let students sleep in a class?I think there are two reasons. >> correct.the first one is that the teacher really know a student who is sleeping is very good student but tired. >> The first one is that the teacher knows that the student who sleeps in class is a very good student but is just tired. So the teacher doesn\'t want to bother him/her. >> correct. teacher already know that person have a potential to achieve an one\'s goal. >> The teacher already knows that person has a potential to achieve his/her goal.But the second one is that the teacher doesn\'t care a student. >> The second one is that the teacher doesn\'t care about the student.the future of the student. >> She doesn\'t care about the future of the student. T.T