Last Thursday, I won the foot bally ball.
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강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing your experience here.^^
It sounds like you had a great time, though at first, you wanted to go home.
I think your team won because you played well.^^
Here are the corrections and maybe we can still talk about this in class, if you like.^^
Have a great day!^^
~T. Nina~
1. What did you do yesterday?
d. I swam.
>> Correct!
2. What do you like to drink?
a. Coffee.
>> Correct!
3. What did you eat last night?
b. Spaghetti.
>> Correct!
4. What are you doing?
a. I\'m eating.
>> Correct!
5. What will you do this afternoon?
c. I\'ll play soccer.
>> Correct!
My boss had gone to business trip Since Monday.
>> My boss had gone to/on a business trip since Monday.^^
So last Thursday, I wanted to go home earlier than usual. because of his absence.
>> So last Thursday, I wanted to go home earlier than the usual because of his absence.^^
as I determined to go home, My boss came back the office.
>>I was determined to go home but my boss surprisingly came back to the office.
Having come back, My boss told our office members that \"Go outside and let\'s play
the foot volleyball.\"
>>My boss then told our office members, \"Go outside and let\'s play foot volleyball.\"
The foot bally ball is kind of bally ball which of player have to play with foot.
>> Foot volleyball is a kind of volleyball wherein the players have to play with their feet.
Main difference between bally ball and foot bally ball is the use of our body part.
>> The main difference between volleyball and foot volleyball is the body parts that are used while playing them.
So we gethered and played foot bally ball.
>> So we gathered and played foot volleyball.^^
we compromised that the loser pay all the bill of dinner.
>> We compromised that the losing team will pay the bills for dinner.
I was belong to boss\' team.
>> I belonged to my boss\' team. /I was part of my boss\' team.
the match was very competitive.
>> The match was very competitive. ^^
at last, we won the game and I ate dinner for free.
>> At last, we won the game and I ate dinner for free.
I was so happy
>> I was so happy.^^
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