last trip
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to America to meet a son who lives in Seattle last year
I did not feel like travel
too much flight time made me hesitate
I was more anxious to see my son
강사 첨삭
Thank you Mrs. [Name] for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. Keep it up ~T. Jasper
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>> I went to America last year to me my son who lives in Seattle.
I did not feel like travel, too much flight time made me hesitate
>> At that time, I didn\'t feel like traveling because of the flight time.
I was more anxious to see my son
>> I hesitated, but I was anxious towards my son, so I went there anyway.
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