Last week of freshmen
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Today is the last week of freshmen.I went to middle school last March.It was pretty good.There is no exam.And I played a lot.And I will go to second-grade class.I don't like to go up.There is a lot of exam at school.
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Hi, [이름]!
Enjoy playing while you can and while you\'re still young.
You can\'t stop or hinder yourself from growing up.
So, enjoy your childhood. ^^
See you on Thursday!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Today is the last week of freshmen.
>> correct
I went to middle school last March.
>> correct
It was pretty good.
>> correct
There is no exam.And I played a lot.And I will go to second-grade class.
>> There is no exam and I played a lot. I will go to second-grade class.
I don\'t like to go up.There is a lot of exam at school.
>> I don\'t like to grow up because there are a lot of exams at school.
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