Last week of freshmen

2018-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Today is the last week of freshmen.I went to middle school last March.It was pretty good.There is no exam.And I played a lot.And I will go to second-grade class.I don't like to go up.There is a lot of exam at school.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Enjoy playing while you can and while you\'re still young.

You can\'t stop or hinder yourself from growing up.

So, enjoy your childhood. ^^

See you on Thursday!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Today is the last week of freshmen.

>> correct

I went to middle school last March.

>> correct

It was pretty good.

>> correct

There is no exam.And I played a lot.And I will go to second-grade class.

>> There is no exam and I played a lot. I will go to second-grade class.

I don\'t like to go up.There is a lot of exam at school.

>> I don\'t like to grow up because there are a lot of exams at school.

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