Last weekend
학생이 쓴 원문
Last weekend, I had a plan to shopping mall to buy baby stuffs and foods which need our family living for a week.
We went to mall with baby at 12 pm on saturday.
We bought a car sheet which is kind of safety chair for sister in law as well as foods.
After purchaing those things, We went to a chinese resturant, and we ate noodules namely Jajjangmoun.
And we went to shooping center for baby stuffs. we bought a tumbling doll as well as diaper and powdered milk.
After coming back home, we cleaned home. I cleaned living and bed room, my wife washed toilet.
We was hungry so that ordered a pizza which are mixed with a pork and a shrimp.
On Sunday, we had a rest home. we watched korean movie namely "ajjessi".
강사 첨삭
It's nice to know that you had a productive weekend and I'm glad that you were able to take a rest at the same time.
~Ella^^
MY CORRECTIONS^^:
Last weekend, I had a plan to shopping mall to buy baby stuffs and foods which need our family living for a week.
>>Last weekend, I planned to go to the shopping mall to buy baby stuffs and foods which should last for a week..We went to mall with baby at 12 pm on saturday.
>>On Saturday, we went to the mall with the baby at 12pm. We bought a car sheet which is kind of safety chair for sister in law as well as foods.
>>We bought a car sit, which is a kind of a safety chair for my sister-in-law and keeps foods in place.After purchaing those things, We went to a chinese resturant, and we ate noodules namely Jajjangmoun.
>>After purchasing those things, we went to a Chinese restaurant and ate noodles named Jajjangmoun.And we went to shooping center for baby stuffs.
>>Then, we went to the shopping center for the baby stuffs.
we bought a tumbling doll as well as diaper and powdered milk.
>>We bought a tumbling doll as well as diapers and powdered milk.After coming back home, we cleaned home.
>>After coming back home, we cleaned our home/house.
I cleaned living and bed room, my wife washed toilet.
>>I cleaned the living room and bedroom while my wife washed the toilet.We was hungry so that ordered a pizza which are mixed with a pork and a shrimp.
>>We were so hungry that we just ordered pizza topped with pork and shrimp.On Sunday, we had a rest home.
>>On Sunday, we just rested at home.
we watched korean movie namely "ajjessi".
>>We watched a Korean movie named 밃jjessi
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