last weekend
학생이 쓴 원문
I was very busy last weekend. I went to the hospital because my wife had surgery and I cleaned my house and cooked .
when wife will return home. I will want to give a present to her.
she wanted some place for tea in house. so I couldn`t do that because of busy.
I started to fix my house last friday.
In morning I was hospital. In afternoon I worked my house.In evening I was hospital. I was very tired and busy.
She returned home yesterday. She liked that. I am happy
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. It\'s good to hear you put effort in your wife. Very good! Keep it up!
- T. Beth
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I was very busy last weekend. >>> correct
I went to the hospital because my wife had surgery and I cleaned my house and cooked .
>>> I went to the hospital because my wife had a surgery and I cleaned my house and cooked.
when wife will return home. I will want to give a present to her.
>>> When my wife returns home, I would want to give a present to her.
she wanted some place for tea in house.
>>> She wanted some place for having tea in the house.
so I couldn`t do that because of busy.
>>> I couldn\'t do that because I\'ve been busy.
I started to fix my house last friday.
I started to fix my house last friday.
>>> correct (I started to fix my house last Friday.)
In morning I was hospital.
>>> In the morning, I was in the hospital.
In afternoon I worked my house.
>>> In the afternoon, I worked in my house.
In evening I was hospital.
>>> In the evening, I went back to the hospital.
I was very tired and busy.
>>> correct.
She returned home yesterday.
She returned home yesterday.
>>> correct
She liked that.
>>> correct
I am happy
>>> correct.
>>> OR: It made me happy.
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