Last weekend, I went…
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Last weekend, I went to my family\'s villa in the mountains to boil chicken and play by the water. This weekend, I plan to meet my friends from middle school and go to karaoke and bowling.
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Hi, there Sheila! ^^ It is nice to know that you had an interesting weekend with your family and I hope you will have a great time with your friends too. ~ T.Gelly
Last weekend, I went to my family\'s villa in the mountains to boil chicken and play by the water.
>> Last weekend, I went to my family\'s on the mountain to boil chicken and play by the river.
This weekend, I plan to meet my friends from middle school and go to karaoke and bowling.
>> This coming weekend, I planned to meet my friends from middle school. We will go to karaoke and play bowling.
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