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After class I went to hang out with my friednds. And I come back home at 11 p.m. So I'm late in composition. I met two friends. They are high school friends. One is get a jop in "Anyang". Anyang is near the "Seoul". She leave the Daegu on tomorrow. Another is leave for Enlgand in September. We talk and have a dinner. Theirs first name are same. for tha reason I call the theirs last name but usually in Korea call the frist name.

Hi Lindsay! It’s okay if you submit your composition late. I’m not really giving you a time limit. I’m actually glad that you are very diligent in writing compositions everyday. Keep it up! You must feel sad about your friends leaving you. I felt devastated too when I left my friends back in Manila. Anyway, I corrected your sentences here. Check them out and see what you need to improve. Have a great weekend Lindsay! ^__^     Late >> correct After class I went to hang out with my friednds. >> After class, I went to hang out with my friends.And I come back home at 11 p.m. >> I came home at 11 pm.So I'm late in composition. >> So I did my composition late.I met two friends. >> I met up with my two friends.They are high school friends. >> They are my high school friends.One is get a jop in "Anyang". >> One of them got a job in Anyang.Anyang is near the "Seoul". >> Anyang is near Seoul.She leave the Daegu on tomorrow. >> She will leave Daegu tomorrow.Another is leave for Enlgand in September. >> Another friend will leave for England on September.We talk and have a dinner. >> We talked and had dinner.Theirs first name are same. >> Their first names are the same.for tha reason I call the theirs last name but usually in Korea call the frist name. >> That’s why I call them by their last names. However, we usually call each other by our first names here in Korea.