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2014-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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To me, elementary was more exciting than middle school and high school. Because as I was getting older, the pressure to go to top universities was getting bigger and harder. However even when I was a kid, I wasn't satisfied with my situation because I was a kid who wanted to be an adult fast. As I become an real adult now, I wish I could go back to my childhood. Time passed so slowly when I was a child but now, time flew so fast as we always feel in our classes. kkk It seems quite sad that I wrote my school days in this way. But as they say, there are the bad as well as the good in the world. I also had a lot of good memories as well. In fact, there are so many happy memories that I couldn't count them.kkk And now when I'm a university student, though I'm having tiring days which makes me look forward to weekend every week, I'm trying to see everything in positive aspects thanks to your everyday positive comments. Thank you, Kristel;) Have a greaaaaat day;) Bye!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!! I so loved reading your composition. :) I am really glad to know that somehow I am making an impact to you though we don\'t really know each other that much! ^^ As I always say, stay positive most of the time because life is just like a wheel. It always has ups and downs that will eventually come to pass. Cheer up, tomorrow\'s Friday!!! hahaha! T.Kristel- To me, elementary was more exciting than middle school and high school. >> CORRECT!!!Because as I was getting older, the pressure to go to top universities was getting bigger and harder. >> CORRECT!!!However even when I was a kid, I wasn\'t satisfied with my situation because I was a kid who wanted to be an adult fast. >> CORRECT!!!As I become an real adult now, I wish I could go back to my childhood. >>  As I become a real adult now, I wish I could go back to my childhood.Time passed so slowly when I was a child but now, time flew so fast as we always feel in our classes. kkk >> CORRECT!!!It seems quite sad that I wrote my school days in this way. >> CORRECT!!!But as they say, there are the bad as well as the good in the world. >> But as they say, there are always bad as well as good things in the world.I also had a lot of good memories as well. >> CORRECT!!!In fact, there are so many happy memories that I couldn\'t count them.kkk >> CORRECT!!!And now when I\'m a university student, though I\'m having tiring days which makes me look forward to weekend every week, I\'m trying to see everything in positive aspects thanks to your everyday positive comments. >> And now that I\'m a university student, though I\'m having tiring days which makes me look forward to weekends every week, I\'m trying to see everything in positive aspects thanks to your everyday positive comments.Thank you, Kristel;) Have a greaaaaat day;) Bye!! >> CORRECT!!!

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