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2016-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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[1] How do you feel about our class today? hi. klein. I am very satisfied with your lesson. I am not good at english. but I believe we could make a good english class. bye bye. [2] List your three best “world expressions” (refer to the list above: set the world on fire, the best of both worlds, the four corners of the world, be worlds apart) and explain your choices briefly. -i don't want to set the world on fire. I think little communication is enough. -one of goals of my life is world tour. so I wanna go the four coners of the world. -i think my friend sun-young and I are worlds apart in our way of thinking and the stye of expression. the matter of our differences, I hope it will be continue forever.

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Greetings! This is your first ever composition here in Power English, [이름]. How do you feel after completing this one? I hope you had this sense of fulfillment and you\'d be more eager to learn and share more. I am truly pleased that you\'re satisfied with our lesson. We may not be good yet but let\'s work on our lapses, so we could develop our skills. You can be the best of both worlds, my friend. You\'re good at speaking English and at the same time, at dealing with matters concerning the stock market. Set the world on fire, [이름]! This is such a good start for you. Enjoy speaking English and writing using it. Until our next chat! I am also looking forward to reading more of your compositions. Stay safe and sound. -Klein- [1] How do you feel about our class today?hi. klein. >>Hi, Klein.I am very satisfied with your lesson. >>CorrectI am not good at english. but I believe we could make a good english class. >>Correct [capitalization; punctuations marks] OR >> I am not good at English but I believe we could make a good English class.bye bye.>>Correct [capitalization] OR >> Bye-bye. [2] List your three best “world expressions” (refer to the list above: set the world on fire, the best of both worlds, the four corners of the world, be worlds apart) and explain your choices briefly.-i don\'t want to set the world on fire. >>Correct [capitalization] OR >> I don\'t want to set the world on fire. I think little communication is enough.>>Correct! -one of goals of my life is world tour. so I wanna go the four coners of the world. >>One of my goals in life is to go on a world tour, so I want to go to the four corners of the world.-i think my friend sun-young and I are worlds apart in our way of thinking and the stye of expression. >>Correct [capitalization; spelling check - style] OR >> I think my friend, Sun-Young, and I are world apart in our way of thinking and style of expression. the matter of our differences, I hope it will be continue forever. >>As for the matter of our differences, I hope it will continue forever.

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