late task^^
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Hi^^
Nowaday, I am busy.
This is my task.
I don't think study abroad is essential. It is just opportunity to see another country to have experience. It is charming study abroad. To study abroad is helpful independency. But I don't agree planless study abroad. To study abroad for English is more unnecessary. If you have willing to English, you can study in your homeland.
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Hi^^
>>Correct!Nowaday, I am busy.
>>Nowadays, I was so busy.This is my task.>>Or: This is my composition.I don\'t think study abroad is essential.
>>I don\'t think studying abroad is essential.
It is just opportunity to see another country to have experience.
>>It is just an opportunity to visit and see another country as an experience.
It is charming study abroad. To study abroad is helpful independency.
>>It is fun to study abroad and it will make a person to be independent.
But I don\'t agree planless study abroad.
>>But I don\'t have plans to go to other country to study.
To study abroad for English is more unnecessary.
>>And I think going outside of my country to study English is unnecessary.
If you have willing to English, you can study in your homeland.
>>If you are willing to learn English, you can study in your homeland.
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