latest fashion
학생이 쓴 원문
It`s not easy to keep up with the latest fashion.
I need to relax my [이름]d and relax my economy,
In old days, I was sensitive to fashion.
As I got married I couldn`t afford to care about myself because I was suffering from life.
Now I buy one trendy item without greed.
I try to make my own style.
After many trials and errors, I think I finally found it
Fashion completes a healthy body.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]~ I appreciate your effort on doing your homework. Keep up the good work. Have a great day. See you in class!
-T. Jasper
-T. Jasper
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>> I need to relax my [이름]d and my economy.
>> In the old days, I was sensitive to fashion.
>> As I got married, I couldn\'t afford to take care of myself because I was suffering in life.
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