Lawmakers' opinion about the class

2010-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nicole

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Lawmakers insist that they are not public servants so that they don't have to participate in the class of sexual harrassment. Fist of all, regardless of they are public servants, they are the people who make the law about sexual harrassment. So, they neccessarily need to know about the topic exactly but they don't know much about that. For example, two of the lawmakers are accused of sexual insulting. Second, there is a law every coporation should educate every employee about how to prevent and deal with sexual harrassment. Given that the lawmakers are employed by the public, they should go to the class.

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Hi good morning [이름]! I am truly amazed by the way you converse you are so open minded and could easily express yourself. You keep up the good! See you tomorrow and have a great day! Nicole   Lawmakers insist that they are not public servants so that they don't have to participate in the class of sexual harrassment. >> Lawmakers insist that they are not public servants so that they don't have to participate in the class of sexual harassment OR >> Lawmakers insist that they are not public servants so that they don't have to participate in education session about sexual harassment Fist of all, regardless of they are public servants, they are the people who make the law about sexual harrassment. >> Fist of all, they are public servants, and they made the law about sexual harassment. So, they neccessarily need to know about the topic exactly but they don't know much about that. >>So, it is necessary for them to know and understand more this topic >> They should have understood the topic well but seems like otherwise. For example, two of the lawmakers are accused of sexual insulting. >>correct Second, there is a law every coporation should educate every employee about how to prevent and deal with sexual harrassment. >>Second, there is a law that every corporation should educate their employees on how to prevent and deal with sexual harassment. Given that the lawmakers are employed by the public, they should go to the class. >> Given that fact those lawmakers are public servants, they should join the class.

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