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2012-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

학생이 쓴 원문

If there is a chance that I can change laws,I will fortify a public education system. Under that system, I wish students can enter all school including university and attend their classes for free as well as get free meals and free school supplies. I thing opportunities should be given to all children regardless of their parents' wealthy.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Good morning! I like your opinion on this, it is very well thought of. Good job! If everything in school would be free, I think students will be more inspired to go to school. A very nice idea indeed!  I\'ll see in class tomorrow. Take care and have a good one! If there is a chance that I can change laws,I will fortify a public education system. >>If there is a chance that I can change laws, I will fortify the public education system.Under that system, I wish students can enter all school including university and attend their classes for free as well as get free meals and free school supplies. >>Under that system. I wish students can enter all schools including the universities and they can attend their classes for free as well as getting free meals and free school supplies.I thing opportunities should be given to all children regardless of their parents\' wealthy.   >>I think opportunities should be given to all children regardless of their parents\' wealth.

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