Lawyers should make a higher salary than nurses

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Well, I also think that nurses should have the highest pay, because they sacrifice a lot for their jobs.

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... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Lawyers deserve respect from people.

>> CORRECT!

However I think their salary is pretty higher than the services they provided.

>> However, I think their salary is pretty higher than the services they provide.

Nurses must take a shift duty especially if they are junior staff.

>> CORRECT!

I think that everybody can agree how night duty difficult is.

>> I think that everybody can agree how difficult a night shift is.

Furthermore the organization culture of nurses is not healthy and need to change.

>> Furthermore, the organization\'s culture of nurses is not healthy and needed to be changed.

It is the major reason that a lot of nurses can not keep their job in the same hospital for long time.

>> It is the major reason that a lot of nurses can\'t keep their jobs in the same hospitals for a long time.

>> OR: It is the major reason that a lot of nurses can\'t keep their jobs for the same hospitals for a long time.

Hospital organization culture in Korea is very conservative and there are barrier between doctors and other professionals.

>> Hospital organization culture in Korea is very conservative, and there are barriers between doctors and other professionals.

All staff in the hospital must follow doctor\'s direction even if it is wrong.

>> All staff in the hospital must follow the doctors\' directions even if they are wrong.

So senior nurse would like to keep close with doctor and they are bully junior nurse.

>> Therefore, senior nurses would like to keep close with doctors, and they bully junior nurses.

I strongly want to suggest that nurses have to get the highest salary among the jobs.

>> CORRECT!